Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Chapter 2: Surprises

"Umm.. Hi Karson!" squeaked Ikan as he stared into the dark gray eyes of the giant he-wolf.
Karson just looked down at the pup and nodded. I guess he's more of the serious type? Maybe he'll get better later... thought Ikan. Karson then smiled.
"I'd like to see you play fight with that pup over there. Her name is Yanari. She's four moons old just like you, and she's my daughter. We may not look much alike, because she takes the place of her mother."
Ikan looked over to his left to see a healthy she-wolf pup. Her brown coat shined like a star underneath the sun, and her icy blue eyes sparkled beneath bright blue sky. Ikan padded over to the beautiful she-wolf.
"Hi, er... Your father told me to play fight with you..." He said as he stared into her eyes.
The she-wolf broke into attention. "Oh, what? Okay, then what are we waiting for? Take the first move." A smirk grew on her face.
First move? I don't know any moves! Ugh... She-wolves these days! Ikan was nervous but excited at the same time. He decided to pounce on Yanari, then paw her ear a bit roughly.
"Okay then, here I go!"
He got into position and leaped, aiming for Yanari. The she-wolf quickly moved, leaving Ikan pouncing onto a tree.
"Hmph. Pathetic. Even for a four moons old I can't believe that's all you got." She teased.
Suddenly, her teasing stopped. Her attention was directly to her father Karson, who paused in a shocked motion. Then Ikan had realized it too. He padded over to Karson to check if he was okay.
"K-Karson? A-Are you okay?" questioned Ikan nervously.
Karson did not answer. He stood there, still very shocked. What is wrong with this guy? He turned his head to the direction Karson was looking, and he too had froze. There stood his father, Hyron with blood trickling down his fleece of white snow. His eye had shown a scar that Ikan knew wouldn't leave.
A few minutes after, Ikan had the urge to run up to his father and show as much love as he could. He couldn't risk losing him, they had done a lot together when he was about two moons old. But he couldn't or else the pain would expand in Hyron. Was Ikan's father going to make it? Or was he going to fall, and leave Ikan as a pup alone with his mother?

Author's note: What do you think will happen next? What characters will show up? What happened to Hyron that made this depocil appear? Will he make it? Also, I'm sorry I didn't put any of the new characters from the character sign-ups yet, I will trust me. I'm also sorry it took a long time, I couldn't think :P I might post a little sooner this time, I feel boosted of plans of what's gonna happen next

3 comments:

  1. O: OMG!

    By the way, here's how characters talking should look:
    "Hey!" Screamed a potato.
    "Hi!" Said a squid.

    Not:
    "Hey!" Screamed a potato. "Hi!" Said a squid.

    If another character is talking, it should be on a different line.

    Just a helpful tip!
    On another note, this chapter is really good! :3

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  2. I already knew but I was in such a rush when I made the first two chapters, so you know. owo Thanks~ Ikan isn't really the main character, I just felt like making him the main character. You shall find out the main character soon >:3

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  3. ^^^We have found suspense^^^

    Galaxywulf/Kori

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